I love this! It's really good, so let's start on the pros:
Amazing picture: I really like the balloons and petals, and the banner.
Great colours: You can see the green of the balloons (to suit his hair XD) and the streamers are still bright, even in the relatively dark room.
Incredible likenesses: You can easily tell that the people in the background are Robin and Sanji!
Now the cons:
I'm not sure...
I don't know if we're meant to be able to read much after,
"The awesome captain Usopp", but what does it all say, if it is actual writing there.
I really like this; you gave information to show when it's time to celebrate and all the other details. The clothing creases are realistic, and it's easy to tell that Chopper's present is a training weight
Thank you so much!!
the ussop present says: the awesome captain ussop, the most incredible men who blah blah xD, because ussop talk a lot xDD.
The presents are:
- Chopper = training weight (like you said xD)
- Sanji = a box with bottles with wine (here in Spain is a good and elegant present xD)
- Luffy... i don't know, maybe something stupid or meat haha. Look at his writting style, he write like a child xDD.
- Robin, maybe a book about swords? xD
- Ussop & franky & brook = a kit for enrolling and caring for katanas xD.
And yes, the people in the background are sanji and robin, and robin is distracting Sanji because Nami wants to be alone with Zoro muahaha xD.
Again, thank you so much for the critique, it means a lot for me!! <3! you're really nice!
You need any more critiques?
I would, but a four-year old girl is watching me (her name is Setori Elvina) and I'm not sure if her parents will really want her to stare at that xD
And I love 'To the stupid marimo' on Sanji's gift